PR campaign

Here is my idea for a commercial that advises positive choices:

The camera pans out to a group of kids, gathered around a table and sitting in chairs. One kid opens the door to the room they are in and says "whats going on guys?" the smile on his face slowly disappearing as he enters and joins the group. "Sandra is dead" one kid of choice gender mutters from the group, while the others sulk and cry. "How....how did it happen?" as the kid sits down and joins the sulking. "Drunk driving, she was under the influence......again" the same choice gender kid mutters. As the camera falls to the center of the table and circles around, giving each individual face time as they now show themselves as they really are, young adults, each saying generic "sorry" messages like, "it was just one beer", " I never thought it could happen to her", "she said she was fine". All this ends to the last person, the person who came last saying "ignorance is for children, and drunk driving isn't an accident, its a choice. So speak, and let a friend know it time to stop, before its time to say goodbye." Im not sure if this is the kind of thing we were expected to do for this blog but yeah, i think i got the most of it!